Re: on the NJ/NY SatAvadhAnam
Ramana R. Juvvadi (juvvadi@horizoncomp.com)
Wed, 11 Sep 1996 15:34:00 -0400
After a personal email by Ramakrishna Pillalmarri gaaru, who
immediately spotted mistakes in the poem.
> vividhOttunga taranga sanghaTTana chaladvEla vanai lAvalI
vividhOttunga taranga ghaTTana chaladvElA vanai lAvalI
> 'lavalI lunga lavanga' sangata latA lAsyambu leekshinchuchun
> dhavalAkshul sani kAnchiranta natteera dEshambunan
dhavalAkshul sani kAnchiranta ***** datteera dEshambunan
> avadAtambuja phEna punja nibhunayyashvOttamun davvulan
avadAtAmbuja phEna punja nibhunayyashvOttamun davvulan
I can' recollect the **** part. I'll refer to my copy of mahA bhAratam
from home and post it later. But knowing that our telusa group
consists of experts on lit, I wouldn't be suprprised if somebody
fills it up tomorrow. Or if you want to get a kick, you might
want to fill it in with your own word and see how you compare to
Nannaya.
Ramana