Re: on the NJ/NY SatAvadhAnam

Ramana R. Juvvadi (juvvadi@horizoncomp.com)
Wed, 11 Sep 1996 15:34:00 -0400


After a personal email by Ramakrishna Pillalmarri gaaru, who 
immediately spotted mistakes in the poem. 

 > vividhOttunga taranga sanghaTTana chaladvEla vanai lAvalI
   vividhOttunga taranga    ghaTTana chaladvElA vanai lAvalI
                   
 > 'lavalI lunga lavanga' sangata latA lAsyambu leekshinchuchun
 > dhavalAkshul sani kAnchiranta       natteera dEshambunan
   dhavalAkshul sani kAnchiranta ***** datteera dEshambunan

 > avadAtambuja phEna punja nibhunayyashvOttamun davvulan
   avadAtAmbuja phEna punja nibhunayyashvOttamun davvulan


I can' recollect the **** part. I'll refer to my copy of mahA bhAratam
from home and post it later. But knowing that our telusa group
consists of experts on lit, I wouldn't be suprprised if somebody
fills it up tomorrow. Or if you want to get a kick, you might 
want to fill it in with your own word and see how you compare to 
Nannaya.

Ramana