RE: yet another sarwa-laghu ....
Bachoti Rao (BRAO@atlas.niaid.nih.gov)
Wed, 28 May 1997 11:57:33 -0400
Warning: The following contains chando-related material.
Uninterested persons or active opponents may kindly skip this post.
Several sarvalaghu poems have beeen posted recently. Because
of the so many sarvalaghu words available in our language, it is
fairly easy to write a poem with all laghuvus unless the meter dictates
otherwise. However, they don't sound well except on rare occasions
like the famous"aDigedanani kaDUvaDi janu" poem. Barring some
exceptions like that, I think there is no great beauty in a sarvalaghu poem
and that may be why very few were written. There is at least one
sarvalaghu seesam in bhAgavatam. I don't remember. seesam can
be a real sarvalaghu one as opposed to kandam which should have
at least two guruvus. Sometime back, Sri Syamala Rao wrote and posted a
sarvalaghu seesam. Here is another sarvalaghu seesam.
dhanamunu gRhamunu kanakamu valuvalu
gadiyaga talachunu hRdayamepuDu
aniSamu vedakunu yaSamunu padavulu
kaligina sirimari kanabaDadadi
valachina maguvayu valachani mugudalu
salipedareDadanu kalakalamunu
paripari vidhamula parugiDu manasadi
okatari nilabaDadoka dinamunu
ichaTa nachaTaku parugiDu neDada vaDini
nimusamayinanu kadalaka nilupagaligi
ihamu paramula naDatala nerigi madini
nikhila janakuni manasuna nilupavalayu!
Regards,
Bachoti Sridhara Rao