"ATa veladi kApuram" - cilipi padyAlu..

Ramabhadra Dokka (sdokka@st6000.sct.edu)
Fri, 3 May 1996 13:40:54 -0400 (EDT)

P.S. : Some time back, SrI PALANA was asking if one can cook up a story
in the form of a "poem series" in telugu Candassu, with the main
ingredients being FUN and ENTERTAINMENT. Here, in this article,
I tried to mix some "AhlAdamu" and "p/funnIyamu" in these "ATa
veladulu" for those who are already saying that "enough of the
'curakalu' on "mahA kavulu" and their kavitalu". Your comments
on these "krotta kApuramlO ceLukulu" also are most welcome, as
always. Again, my attempts to realize the co-existence/importance
of sAhityamu in day-to-day life, in this article are completely
fictional and I would appreciate if you can lemme know about the
physical existence of these characters in real life apart from
the reel-life(movies, dramas etc..).. idI bRhannAradIyam lOnidE,
"ATa veladi kApuram" ani, "kanyA Sulkam, varakaTnam" la taruvAti
chapter, cadivi AnandincanDi mari..:-)

(Sorry for the length of this article, as I did not want to break
it into two parts:-()

cilipi padyAlu - ATa veladi kApuram
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telugu sAhityamanTE amitamaina aBimAnamunna O janTa, alavOkagA kalusukoni,
kAsinni "ATa veladulU", marinni "tETa gItulU", pADukonTU kalisipOyina
vainamidi.

A madhyana vALLiddarU peLLi cEsukoni "anurAgapu campaka mAlalU", "aBimAnapu
TutpalammAlalU" vEsEsukonnAru. ayitE, vAriruvurU, kotta kApuramlO paDi,
sAhityam gurinci peddagA carcincukOvaDam lEdani, anukonTunnArEmO, vAri
madhyana, alavOkagAnO, alavATugAnO CandO bandhAlu perigi parimaLincAyi.

vAri jIvana-kavanAraNaymlO "SArDUla, mattEBAlaki" sthAnam lEdu, annI "saraLa
taraLA"lE, "ragaDa"la gaDabiDalu lEvu, antA "sarasa rasa sIsamE" pravahi-
stOndi. Atani "mutyAla sarAlaki", Ame "matta kOkila" lA pancama swaram
Alapincindi. Ame "mandAkrAntam"aitE, AtaDu "madhyakkara"mainADu. A apara
"kinnerasAni", jIvana gamanAniki AsarA iccE "bAva" tAnainADu. uDikintalatO,
UrintalatO modalaina A "cilipi kayyAlu", vAri kApuramlO kammani kavvintalai,
Apai, vinE vArikI, cadivE vArikI, vintaina vinOdAnni pancutU, ravvanta
nav"vinta"layyAyi kUDA..:)

ippuDu vAri dainandina jIvitamlO - atagADu modaTi pAdam visiritE, Ame renDO
pAdam virustOndi, ataDu AlaSyamgA mundukostE, Ame koncem mundugAnE anudkon-
TOndi. ataDu gaTTigA praSnistE, Ame GAtugA samAdhAnam cebutOndi. ayitE,
vyAkaraNa badhdhamgA vAdulADukonTunnA, vAri "asalu rahasyam", A manassullOni
prEmAnurAgAla "vRttA"lani grahinca galigE vArikE avagatamoutundi.

appuDappuDu, "yati mATa" maracinA, "gati" tappanidI, "sakhyata/maitri"
ceDanidI, ayinaTuvanTi, vAri "ATa veladi kApuram" viSEshAlivi,
AlakistArA ?? ---

( P.S. : In the following pieces, Mr.ATa veladi is speaking in alternate
lines, i.e. #1 and #3 and Mrs.ATa veladi is replying EVENLY in
the even lines :-), numbered #2 and #4, making it a TRUE "CandO
badhdha ATa veladi kApuram". In the following pieces, the "gati"
is in tact and only "yati" was ignored, at some places. )

Mr.A.V. :" kaDupu lOna nAku yelukalu parugette,
Mrs.A.V.: yEmi sEtu nEnu yEmi sEtu ??
Mr.A.V. : cEya rAda Tiphinu cakkaTi Dinnaru,
Mrs.A.V.: valla kAdu nAku vanTa rAdu !!

peLLi cEsukonTi paramAnnamunu kOri,
peLLa manna vanTa manishi kAdu !
yinTi panulu cEyu TillAli dharmamE ??
bAdhya tundi manaku sagamu sagamu !!

kaTTukonuTa kEvi yistiri baTTalu,
baTTalutuku konaga badhdhakammu !
cEsi peTTa vaccu sommEdi pOdulE,
peLLa manna "cAki" manishi kAdu !!

patiki seva jEya paramArtha munnadi,
goDDu cAki rIki gaTTi pEru !
cakka didda nillu cAkirI yeTlounu ??
pancu koneda mipuDu panulu manamu !!

mEmu siddha maiti maTulanE kAnimmu,
mammu yinka mIda maruva valadu !
yinTi SuBra tandu sAhAyamittunu,
cetta bayaTa pOyu paniyu mIde !!

vanTa panulu nIvi vanTillu nIdilE,
anTa ginne lakunu rAju tamare !
vanDi beTTa galava ? vAyidA padhdhatini,
kUra tarigi beTTu doralu mIru !!

mApu baTTalakunu maharANi nIvelE,
pakka baTTalettu praBuvu mIre !
tIsukonumu nIvu wAshingu Dryingu,
yistirIni mIke rAsi yisti !!

bayaTa tinDi mATa maruvanga valayunO,
pAci nOTa kAfi yaDuga rAdu !
yillu cEragAne yikilimpagA valadu,
alasi solasi asalu saNuga valadu !!

nIdu bAbu tappu ninnEla anavale,
amma bAbu yanuTa tappu tappu !
tappu oppu lekka tElEdi kAdulE,
tepparilli nijamu teliya galaru !!

kOri cEsukonTi ninkEmi jEtunu,
krotta muccaTandu mOsa pOti !
mATa keduru mATa nAkETi nuvu pOTi ??
talacu konTi nEnu gelutu nanTi !!

***** ilA konta dUram sAgAka ******

padya pAda mulato kavvinci, navvinci,
Canda munaku Denda mappa ginci !
cakkani gati cUpi cIkAku pOgoTTi,
paluka rinca valayu padamu lalli !!

panca dAra cindu tIyani prAsalu,
tEne dhAra vanTi telugu sottu !
manci BAva munna madhurAksharapumAla,
yenci cUDa manamu nincu sukhamu !!

jIvitAna kalavu CandOpasangatulu,
taraci cUDa teliyu jatulu gatulu !
manasu dOcinaTTi manda krAntavunIvu,
prEma mIra jagati tETa gIti !!

utpalampu mAla nIkidiye vEtunu,
campakammu littu nimpu gAnu !
rasa rAjya mEludamusIsasImalan,
andamundi dharaNi kandaSrENi !!

ninnu gAka nEnu yinkErinuDikintu,
mIku nAku tagunu sariga sariga !
ATa veladi yandu mATalu ruvvakO,
pATa padyamandu, dITu nEnu !!

ATa linka cAlu sahadharma cAriNI,
kavita ceppa valena kavana sakhuDa !
tIrikaina vELa tirigi cUtamulemmu,
yitara gatula sAgu vRtta mulanu !!

meccu kOre janulu muccaTaga manalanu,
paccanaina manadu jIvanammu !
yullamulanu gelici callanga yundamu,
kavana sIma manadu kApurammu !!"

regards..

- Ram (Ramabhadra Dokka from sdokka@st6000.sct.edu)

P.S. : manci gatiyu kOri yati maitri maraciti,
Canda hIna mancu ceraga valadu,
gaNamu lamara jEsti yeggoTTi diggoTTi,
sAra menci tappu lenna tagadu..:)

manamu nandagimpa manci prErANatODa,
navvulisti hAsya racana cEsti,
mecci rEni mailu pampuDI cAlunu,
sarasa hRdaya telu(gu)sa mitR lAra..:-)