Re: SrInAthuni Akhari chATuvu
Subbarao Varigonda (varigond@cems.umn.edu)
Thu, 6 Mar 1997 14:35:37 -0600 (CST)
Hi
> I guess it is "kailasagiri panDe mailAru vibhuDEgi".
> Also it is "rAhuttunDu".
> Just typos.
>
> Regards,
>
> Bachoti Sridhara Rao
Sri Ramakrishna too pointed some typos. So, let me give the corrected
version.
sI. kASikA ViSwEsu galase veeraareDDi
ratnAmbarambulE rAyaDichchu
kailaasagiri panDe mailAru vibhuDunDe (*)
dinavechchamE rAju teerchagalaDu
rambhagUDe tenungu rAya rAhatuDunu (**)
kasturikE rAju prastutintu
swargasthuDayye vissana mantri mari hEma
pAtrAnna mevvani pankti kaladu
gI. bhaaskaruDu munne dEvuni paalikarige
kaliyugambuna nika nunDa kashTamanuchu
divija kavivaru gunDiyal digguranaga
aruguchunnaaDu Srinaathu Damarapuriki
(*) 'vibhuDunDe' is as I got it from India in telugu script.
If you are sure that it is 'vibhuDEgi' and not 'vibhuDunde'
then you may correct it. I feel, since both suit the chandas
and no major distortion is done, either is fine.
(**) This is a more serious problem. I got the poem with 'rAhatunDu'
which doesn't suit the chandas. 'rAhatuDunu' is a modification
by me. 'rAhuttunDu' is also suitable.
I don't know whether the person being referred to is
'rAhatuDu' or 'rAhutuDu'. I don't know it's meaning either.
If you are certain that it's 'rAhutuDu', it can be changed as
'rAhuttunDu'
regards,
subbarao
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