Re: 'svEccha - uniki'

Subbarao Varigonda (varigond@cems.umn.edu)
Thu, 27 Feb 1997 16:49:18 -0600 (CST)


hi!

Independently taken, the poems are a good reading.
But I couldn't draw a coherent conclusion about svEcCha-uniki after I read
the whole poem.
Is there a definite view point  being implied seriously about svEcCha-uniki? 

There are some 'yati' errors at some places. 
  eg:   ide  prabhAkaru  nabhimatamu  naraya
        ^^^                   ^^^^
        unnateTlu  vaccu?  nevani kaina   
        
BTW,
 you said:
>          'prANavAyu'  venta  prAmukhya tunnanu
>          'udajani'ni  galiyaga  uniki  pOyi
>          'udaka'  magucu,  tAnu  utkRshTa  mavvadE?
>           ide  prabhAkaru  nabhimatamu  naraya
 
But you must be knowing that 
A.ve.  Aksijanuku mIru haiDrOjanungalpa
       visphulinga mokaTi vEya kunna
       udaka mIya bOdu  utkRshTa mUgAdu
       idi rasAyanAna chadivi yunTi!

reagrds,
vari
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