ATaveladi Chandas: A small correction

Subbarao Varigonda (varigond@cems.umn.edu)
Wed, 12 Feb 1997 14:54:13 -0600 (CST)


Thanks to Srinivas for pointing the mistake quickly.
The poem I sent had a small problem as explained by him below.

If the third line is taken as "ina gaNa trayambu nindra dvayambunu", then
everything is okay. Earlier, I left the trailing "nu".

I am very sorry for the inconvenience.

-vari
> 
> 
> Hello Varidonda gaaru,
> 
>  Thanks for posting the chandas of ATaveladi. I have a problem is
> correlating it to the Thrid padam of the posted poem.. Am I missing anything?
> 
>  Ist padam has consecutively 3 suryaganas+2 Indra ganas. 2nd and 4th
> paadams both have 5 suryaganas. I have problem with only 3rd paadam.
> Also is it important to be _contiguous_  the 3 Suryaganas and 2 Indraganas on
> odd-numbered paadams? 
> 
>  Thanks
>  -Srinivas
> 
> >   A. sUryu DokkaDunDu surarAju liddaru     (1-surya,2-indra ganaalu &)
> >      dinakara dvayambu tETagIti            (2-surya ganalu per padam is gIti)
> 
>   -----<n-><-ha-><ha><--ta----><ha-->---  => 4 suryaganas + 1 Indragana
>        II I U  I  U I   U  U  I U   I
> >      inagaNa trayambu nindradvayambu    (3-surya,2-indra ganaalu odd pada &)
> 
> >      hamsa pancakambu nATaveladi.        (5-surya ganaalu even pada is veladi)
> > 
> >  yati maitri should be there between the first letters of 1st and 4th gana.
> >  praasa yati can be used instead of yati.
> > 
> > indra gana: nala(IIII)  naga(IIIU)  sala(IIUI) bha(UII) ra(UIU) ta(UUI)
> > surya gana: n(III) ha(UI)
>  
> 


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