About telusA welcome message
Subbarao Varigonda (varigond@cems.umn.edu)
Wed, 12 Feb 1997 09:22:58 -0600 (CST)
Hello everybody!
The following message is sent by the listprocessor of telusa when I subscribed
to the list. The poem needs a small correction (if it is intended to be
a metric poem. Otherwise, no problem!)
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> "tikka konta lEka telugu vADeTlounu!"
> anna mATa nicaTa vammu jEsi
> sahRdayatanu manamu sampratincedanu
^^^^^^
> nammakammuna 'telusA!' modalaye
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
The phrase 'sampratincedanu' is too short to give two indra ganas.
'sampradincedaminka' is a possible modification.
The last line is vague and inconsistent with the first three lines. (my opinion
only). yati/prasa is also not followed. If the intention is to tell the new
comer that they trust him/her in being wise and polite in discussions, it can
be put as:
'nammi telusa iTaku mimmu pilace'
I don't think it is just a vacanam whose first lines incidentally suited ATaveladi
chandas though ATaveladi is indeed very 'saraLam' and can be composed 'asuvugA'
without much effort.
regards,
vari
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