Enough of the heat generated by the first part and my swaying there of in
reply to it. "aDigE vADiki, ceppE vADu" lOkuvO, kAdO ceppalEnu kAnI,
avadhAna prakriyaki, yI sAmeta vartincadani intaku mundE anukonnAm kadA.
I liked what PALANA said about this - "ceppE vADiki(pRchchakuDu with a
bad thought in mind) cemuDaitE, vinE vADiki(avadhAni as well as the audience)
vivEkam vunDoddA ??". As far as I know, an "avadhAni" is a "saraswatI
upAsakuDu" first, and then kavi, racayita, gAyakuDu etc.. So, "vivEkam"
naturally should be the first step for anyone, who worships what he does.
In my opinion, vivEkam is the 'altar' on which an avadhAni performs the
"saraswatI upAsana" and "sAhitya pOshaNa".
ika avadhAna prakriya lO "aSlIlata", "asaByata" anna amSAla gurinci
prastAvistU, mari konni sAdhAraNA, asAdhAraNA samasyalanu mI munduncutU,
konta cAkacakyam, okinta sama(s)ya sphUrti unTE, samasyala lOni artha
vaiparItyAnni tolagincaDam yenta sulaBamO vivarincE prayatnam cEstAnu.
indali samasyalalO konniTini "kanda"mula krindaku cErca vaccu kAbaTTi,
I tried the kandO versions also. The non-(C)kanda versions are a kind
of "firsTu DrAfTulu..:-)", back from those SCIT days.
Here you go..
4. " kappanu jUci pAmu gajagaja vaNiken..
" ceppi rAvu manaku kaShTAlu kannILLU,
eppaTikI mArca rAdu, vidhi nEmandun ??
oppani kAlamu tappadu, yentaTi vAraina gAni,
kappanu jUchi paamu gajagaja vaNiken.. "
Excuse me, if I went wrongly on the philosophical note, ikkaDa,
kappanu jUci pAmu gajagaja vaNiken (okAnokaPPuDu) anEdi dRShTAntamgA
tIsukoni.. kashTa kAlam lO entaTi vArikainA iTuvanTi vipatkara
paristhitulu, viparIta pariNamAlu tappavani ceppE prayatnam cESAnu..
I krindi prayatnAlalO, bhAvam ceDakunDuTa kOsam cinna mArpu cEsi
"vaNiken" ni "vaNakun" ani ilA kUDA prayatnincAnu.. idi, bank loans
vagairAlu tIsukoni, I "cali dESA"niki caduvulakoccina nAlAnTi
sOdarulaki O UraDimpu..
" appulatO vaccinAmu amerika dEsambiTa
tippalatO caduvu manaku tappadu bradarU !
eppaTikO mancirOju, yappaTi varakU,
kappanu jUci pAmu gajagaja vaNakun.. "
manci rOju vaccE varakU (rOjulu tanavi kAnanta varakU), kappanu
jUcinA pAmu gajagaja vaNukutundi.. anE artham pratibimbimpa
cEyaDAniki prayatnincAnu....
" goppaga ceppuduru janulu yaccaTi vintal,
meppunu bondeDi sthalamulu, ghana "Museum"ulan
doppaga lEmu yunnadaTa, O viDDUramboura,
kappani jUci pAmu gajagaja vaNakun... "
5. vidyale pratibandhakamulu vidyArthulakun...
We go with the non-CandO version first ---
" baDi cEreDi dAri yandu pAmula nADincu vADu
naDi rODDuna nAgaswaramu mrOgimpangan, gumi
gUDiri janulu yacaTA naDayADeDi nAgu jUDa, gA
raDi vidyale pratibandhakamulu vidyArthulakun.. "
Well, after that first attempt at the rough draft, here you go with
some candO-badhdha pUraNalu :
ka : " udyO gamulUDi gamulu,
vidyArthula bOdha sEyu viddelu yElan ??
sadyunnati yA ? bAnisa
vidyale pratiban dhakamulu vidyA rthulakun !!"
ka : " vidyArthula nErpa valayu
vidyuktamu gAni nETi viddelgumAstA,
udyOgAlou, bAnisa
vidyale pratibandhakamulu vidyArthulakun !!"
6. nAsAgramu nandu Sarma nartana jEsen...
Here is a non-candO pUraNA --
" vyasanAlerugani vyaktigA, ma
nasuna mancini talaceDi mangaLamUrtigA, tana
dESAniki pEru teccu SAstraj~unigA,
NASA-gramunandu Sarma nartana jEsen.. "
Here are a couple of CandO - kandO - pUraNalu....:-)
ka : " vyAsAlanu pracurincenu,
BAsimpaga nAlgu diSala BArata SOBal
A sainsuna nObeltO
NASA-gramunandu Sarma nartana jEsen.. "
( pai renDu pUraNalu, NASA lO nunna "Sarma" gArlandarikI
aBinandanalu teluputU, vAri vAri praj~lu gurtincE "noble
nobel" kOsam eduru cUstunna sATi BAratIyunigA --- )
maroka p/funny pUraNa --
ka : " mIsAlanu tIse tanadu,
bAsul meccaga salipenu pariSOdhanalan,
vIsA citizen shippaye,
NASA-gramunandu Sarma nartana jEsen.. "
( idi vividha study/work vIsA la mIda I dESAniki vacci,
tadanantaram 'NASA' lO mannanalandukunTunna vArikOsam..:-) )
7. yelukalu tama kalgu lOnki yenugu nIdcen! (traditional)
Again, here is a non candO pUraNa --
" baaluni alukanu tIrpaga, janakuDu talayinci tecce,
palu vintagu bommalu, pululu, yEnugul,
alasenu buDataDu nATala niduriDa doDagen,
yelukalu tama kalgu lonki yEnugu nIdcen... "
and now a CandO, kandO version..
ka : " alasina buDataDu nATala,
palu vintagu raiLLu, bomma pulu lEnugulan,
solasenu niddura jArenu,
yelukalu tama kalgu lOnki yEnugu nIDcen.. "
pai renDu pUraNala lOnU, oka yEnugu bommanu yelukalu tama
kanta/kalugu lOniki yIDcinaTlugaa citrincE prayatnam cESaanu...
Inviting your comments, corrections, suggestions and more pUraNamulu,
maLLI kaluddAm,
regards...
- Ram ( Ramabhadra Dokka from sdokka@st6000.sct.edu )
P.S. : mAdhav gAru pampincina "mahA sahasrAvadhAna viSEshAlu" bAgunnAyi.
This is what we were discussing about, when I called home this
weekend. mAdhav gArU.. keep'em coing. Please take all of us to
telugu lalita kaLA tOraNam with all those "samasyalu and sangatulu"
of our avadhAna brahma's latest literary fea(s)t.