Lemme give my pUraNamulu with another variation in the second one, if you'd
permit, for this samasya.
The first one first --
Aa : " tODu lEni nADu, dikku tOcani nADu,
vidhiyu venTa rAni gaDDu rOju,
marala marala manasu nOdArci lAlimpa,
vEDi kanTi nIre varamu manaku !! "
and before I proceed with the second one, here is how I created this samasya
- I was referring "Sabda ratnAkaramu" for the meaning of a word that starts
with va/sa, and in doing so, I also found a new meaning for "vEDi kanTi".
Though anyone can use vEDi kannu referring to "Sivuni mUDO nEtram" in
vyAvahArikam, referring "SivuDu" as "vEDi kanTi" (noun) was new for me and
I thought, "why not a make a samasya out of it ?". I expected that some of
the telusa-ers would catch this meaning in their pUraNamulu.
I put forward my attempt which goes on these lines here --
Aa : " GOra tapamonarce nA BagIrathuDanta,
SivuDu santasinci SirasunUpe,
mouni venTa vacce mOuLi yandali ganga,
vEDi kanTi nIre varamu manaku !!"
I think, SrI mAcavaram madhav gAru gave a samasya on the net which goes as
" BArya prakkana cOTicci bayaTa nilice.."
That is a very interesting samasya, endukanTE, entaTi vADainA, marokaniki,
tana BArya prakkana cOTiyyaDu, iTuvanTi sandarBAlalO tappitE..:-)
tE : " talli tanDrula viDadIya sutuDu kalige,
santu kalgina santOsha manta karige,
yETi pondika likamIda pastu lanucu,
BArya prakkana cOTicci bayaTa nilice !!"
Lemme know what you think on that attempt ??
and now moving onto the next samasya, once again in the "ATa veladi" metre --
samasya #19 -- amma puTTinillu mAma kEla ??
amma "puTTinillu mEnamAmakeruka" ani unnadi, kAnI pai vidhamgA yeppuDU vinalEdu
anTArA ?? adE samasya mari..:-)
Waiting for your comments, corrections, suggestionsa and pUraNamulu..
With regards,
- Ram (Ramabhadra Dokka from sdokka@st6000.sct.edu)