I used to pride myself that I was resonably well aware of the chandO
rules ... But my memory is playing tricks ... I was not aware of the
rule of ja or nala gaNa in the third gaNa in the long lines ... I seem
to recollect reading something like that though ... So I must have
forgotten it !
As I confessed I rely on my feel of the poems for reading or writing
them. I did feel that the poem I wrote was odd to read but I thought
that was because of the vAduka bhaasha words I wanted to write it with.
To those who find fault with the last line ... I would like to point out
that the word in the last line is "kandamlo" and not "kandamlO" !
Regards,
Sankaram
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| SANKA RAMAKRISHNA |
| e-mail : sanka@erc.msstate.edu |
| home page : http://www.erc.msstate.edu/~sanka/ |
| phone : 601-325-2526 (Work.) |
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