May be there is a mistake in the last line yati ... !
I thought I had a "a" in the beginning which is why I settled
for a "a" yati. I dont know if it is ok ... but safe would be to
use a "na" yati ...
let me try ...
I guess I could use the version I wrote below the last line and
use kavitanandina .... or is "la" yati compatible with "na" ?!
*so many doubts ....*
anyway this should be sufficient:
kandam naakentO ish
Tam daannaDaka bahu viSishTam kada cadivE
Tanduku anduku naakaa
nandamu kandamlo kavitanandina telusaa !!
Regards,
Sanka-ram (:-)
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