Sri Syamala Rao gaaru made some corrections for my first samasya.
> Now about the "yati" headache. ha with pE. "a A" and "e E" are not
> friendly for yati.
> Kindly excuse me if I sound any harsh.
> If I may be allowed to re-write the line, I might write as:
> harmyambuna nunDe bIda vADai yelamin
I gather even ha and vA in the correction does not match, though the vowel
parts match. I am going back to my original samasya with small change to
fit the yati - based on the yati table I received since ha can match with
ya
My original samasya was:
> ka. harmyambun tanu vasinche pEdarikamunan
the corrected version without deviating too much from the original is:
ka. harmyamunandu nivasinche yaachakuDainan
The second samasya:
The original version had - yati problem to start with: I have to get back
to u (I mean u-kaara) for yati !
> ka. uurdhvOrdhvambu jani chEre ghOraadhamunan
The corrected version is:
ka. UrdhvOrdhvamuga jani ponde nutpAtambun
The problem I had was ur or ut pratyaya mostly denotes higher rather than
lower while I wanted to drop down. And I could not use adha for the same
yati reason. The corrected version will do that job.
The third samasya the original was:
> ka. aa styEnuDu dongalinche navaNula kOkal
Here it was just my negligence ( I realize that I got to learn also how to
type and proof read) - it has to be avalula ( she/they may be avaNiimaNulu
or avanijalu or both, but here avalulu will do the job - at least what we
need is their kOkal!). The corrected version is:
ka. aa styEnuDu dongalinche navalula kOkal.
In all these the dushTa or kashTa praasa will be the major problem.
Repeating the same in all the four lines is one escape.
Now this is what I call getting up after falling down, and looking around
to see that no body has seen you falling, and even if they have seen just
ignoring them as if they are not there!
Of course, I must thank everyone who helped me in my education and telusa
for providing a forum for it.
My offer to give a surprise gift for those who completed the three is still
valid! The conditions remain the same. Now any one who wants to take up
the offer!
Hari Om!
Sadananda
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