Pillalamarri just now said the same thing, he also noticed the error but wanted
the others to notice it.
Well everybody wants to be nice to me, I guess.
I just started writing poems three weeks ago with the help of Pillalamarri.
I am trying to learn and of course the yati rules are not yet comprehensable for
me. May be you can blame my guruvu gaaru!
Next time I would like every one to know that I donot mind getting corrected on
the spot.
Let us face it!
In the true advaitic spirit, being a disciple of Chinmya, I know that I am never
ignorent and of course nor intellegent too!- They are the properties of the
intellect, everybody is borned with ignorence, and the ignorence it has can be
removed by learning process only. These are acquired skills and can be acquired
by those who have an aptitude and matching effort.
Well may be enough philosophy since this is not a sanskrit internet.
I am giving below correction by Pillalamarri since he send it by personal mail.
Thanks for everybody for helping me to learn the art.
Hari Om!
Sadaananda
Sadananda gaaru wrote:
> >> ambaTi vaariki kuuDaa
> >> sambaramuga ceppadagunu naakaakshalu, nee
> >> yambaTi vaari valananE,
> >
> >eka naalugava line? ninna vrasinadi tappu - kotta line
> >
> > nimbhamuuga telisenu varakaTnamu bhaadal|
> >
> >
> >Any better solution to ambaties before the year ends?
> >
>
> But, of course!
>
> praasaki yatini jataparici, idigO naa prayatnam.
>
> kandam: ambaTi vaariki kooDaa
> sambaramuga ceppadagunu Subha bhaavana lee
> yambaTulacE telise, SO
> kambagu yabalala gati vara kaTnamu valanan.
>
> Hope that works. I noticed the praasa bhangam in your initial post, but I
> didn't want to be the devil's advocate:-)
>
> Regards
> Nasy
_______________________here is the pillalamarri's correction
Pillalamarri's correction:
ambaTi vaariki kuuDaa
sambaramuga ceppadagunu naakaakshalu, nee
yambaTi valana kadA, aSu-
bhambagu kaTnAla valani bAdhalu telisen
or
yambaTi valananegA! aSu-
bhambagu ..........
Ramakrishn
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