4 corrections ('bhAsha-bhAvamu')

vissa@cortex.neuro.mssm.edu
Mon, 18 Dec 1995 08:07:25 -0500

Dear TELUSA readers:

I figured 4 corrections reuired in my post 'bhAsha-bhAvamu'- 2typos, and 2 grammar corrections. (Being poetry, even typos disturb grammar.) Here are they.The corrections are underlined).

1st poem: 3nd line: (typo)

'bhAsha dEhame yaina bhAvamagunu yAtma'
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2nd poem: 1st line (typo)

'Atma veDalina yanta dEhamu Savamagu'
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2nd poem: 3rd line (grammar)

'jIvamElEni bhAsha yEdaina nEmi?'
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3rd Poem; 1st line 9grammar)

'svAbhimAnamunna manujulu yEvELa
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My sincere apologies for the inconvenience this may have caused.

With regards,

Prabhakar Vissavajjhala, Ph.D.
Fishberg Research Center for Neurobiology
Mt. Sinai School of Medicine
New York, NY 10029